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Ben drowned x reader LEMON!!!!!!!!
You walked to the dark green door and opened it. You walk in the room to see a normal room one bed and a desk with a desk lamp and a computer.
The desk lamp was dim but it lite up the room fairly good to the point were you can see your surroundings. You walked over to the computer and saw it was on! A window was opened and it was on cleverbot.com.
You typed in "hello…"
"Hello who are you?" It asked.
"(Name)" "who are you?"
"BEN"
You guys talked for a while but then he stopped talking. You dont know why. You walked around the room for a while and sooner or later you sat on the bed and fell asleep.
*bing!* you heard a noise coming from the computer. You sat at the desk chair and found someone sent a email? You open the email to find some writing or at story. The story was on a website called creepypasta.Com. it was a story you heard about you read it once but didn't remember what it was about so once more you read it.
After you finished you went on clever bot again and typed in
"Are you ben?"
"…yes…" shivers ran down your spine. And final you got enough courage to type in "are you real?"
"Yes" you sat the stund you though all of these storys were fake! They can't be real right? You sat there just mind blow and final you looked up at the screen and saw that ben has typed in "im coming out…" this was bizarre because you haven't even texted him back.
The lights shut off right after you read that text. The computer turned to a blue screen and started to get fuzzy and made those ear shredding noise that you hated. You were sure your ears would bleed but the room started to shake. You hid under the bed and layed their starring at the desk leg.
You waited there for what seemed like years and final it stoped and you saw two brown boots hit the floor with a loud thud. You creeped over under the bed just enough to give you a good view of what this person looked like.
You peaked over to see a small boy about as tall as you maybe a few cm. Taller. he had a very dark green out fit on with a long dark green hat under his hat was blond hair that covered his face and he had a sword at his side.
He put the cover on the sword and threw it on the bed. He kneed one one knee and reached under the bed and grabed your wrist and pulled you out from under the bed! He raised you up and you stared into his crimson red eyes that had dried dark red blood coming from each eye.
"PLEASE LET ME GO!" You screamed and squirmed as he hald your wrist so tight that it hurt.
He smirked as he pinder you on the was and kissed you so hard you lips stared to hurt. He came up for a breath of air and gave a little laugh and moved down to you neck. He kissed your neck gently and moved to your collar bone and toyed with your sensitive flesh till it turned bright pink. You mouned under your breath as a faint blush creeped over your face you bite the bottom of you lip as the bloned haired boys hand let go of your wrists and mover over your skin and one ran down your back to your entrance. He entered one finger in you and gently and slowly mover it in and out.
"AH!…n …no ben!" You clung onto his back as he entered another finger. He picked you up and layed you on the bed and you had a feeling this was going to be a long night…
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"AH~ …NO STOP… I …IM GOING TO AH~!" You heard the bed banging on the wall slow down as your body final fell on the bed from exhaustion. You layed your head on the soft pillow and looked into the blond boys red eyes as he leaned and kissed you.
"You've meet with a terrible fate haven't you?" He asked with the slightest smirk on his face.
You smile and looked at him once more "no …… cause I have you…" he blushed at your answer.You snuggle into his chest as he put his arm around you and held you tight as you drifted off to sleep.
WOAH! Had a little fun with ben did you? ;D but please share this comment , favorite and please watch! And go to my profile for the introduction to this it would mean a lot if you did all these thing! Thank you for reading!
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:iconatuladventuretime:
Atuladventuretime Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015
GEEZ..I THOUGHT IT WILL BE A LONG STORY AND DOESN'T HAVE S E X !
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ASTRALGIRL301 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  New member
tht is messed up
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TheCatsNightmare Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  New member Student Artist
My reply to ben when he said you met with a terrible fate: "YES!! GO AWAY!! *Screams*"  
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darkemilyrobin Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015
lol after i read "*bing!* you heard a noise coming from the computer." a bing came from my laptop XD
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disconsoIated Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  New member
wtf
1. that escalated a little fast lmao

2. you should really work on your grammar ,,,

3 . uuuuuh yeah this needs a mature content
i've seen soft stuff that has a mature content , so this certainly needs mature content 
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Therealmlpnyx Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
Oh, Lord, what just happened?!
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LookingGlassForbidds Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  New member Hobbyist Filmographer
the grammer is one thing. and two it went way to fast. it went from him kissing her to that one weird part i couldnt understand. they didnt even undress how is that suppose to be lemon? please do not find this offencive. embrace these critized comments and learn from them. it made me a better writer and now people love my stories on fanfiction and now im starting on here. i think it will help you to.
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mrsfoxy123 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Student Artist
Well it should have mature content but I don't see no word like member,cum,butt,dick or nothing I dont see the fucking problem
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MinVerden Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015
OMFG Shouko-Blush (Baka to test) 
That was so cute and hot Tomoyo Blushing Icon RP Face: Super blush 
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amliajane12345 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Student Writer
Please, put mature content and fix your spelling (Because at one point I was like "Pinder?")
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InSaNe-DrAwInGs Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  New member
Wtf there are kids who look this up that r under 10 mature continent pls
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XMonochrome-NimbusX Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Please put a Mature Content rating on this.
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DevilLadLover1 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your grammar says you shouldnt be writing lemon
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Muramasa74 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  New member
LOL is this reader X majoras mask link statue?????????????????? 
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7omb0ysRul3 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  New member
I will continue reading when you fix those damn spelling errors

No offense
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InSaNe-DrAwInGs Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  New member
I agree there are to many kids that look this up
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EddyGrunge Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015
It'd be better if you stuck to one time frame: Past, Present, or Future. It's easier to freak people out when they read it if it sounds like it's presently happening in their head. I doubt there are many reading it out loud....
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shawnna-ciel Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I liked it. Other then the spelling errors it was darn Good. Although confusing. When did He take off my clothes? I have creepy pasta lemons if anyone wants to read them. 
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apathicgirl7 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  New member Student Writer
0//0 bruh u got me like blushing right now lol
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Zancrispy Featured By Owner Edited Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
While reading, I noticed several mistakes among your writing. Please don't take this in a negative way. I just want to see you improve, that's all. 

You walked to the dark green door and opened it. You walk in the room to see a normal room, one bed, and a desk with a desk lamp and a computer.
The desk lamp was dim but it lite lit up the room fairly good to the point were where you can see your surroundings. You walked over to the computer and saw it was on! A window was opened and it was on Cleverbot. 
You typed in "hello…" 
"Hello, who are you?" It asked. 
"(Name)," "who are you?"
"BEN" 
You guys talked for a while but then he stopped talking. You don't know why. You walked around the room for a while and sooner or later you sat on the bed and fell asleep.
*bing!* You heard a noise coming from the computer. You sat at the desk chair and found someone sent an email. You open the email to find some writing or a story. The story was on a website called Creepypasta. It was a story you heard about, you read it once but didn't remember what it was about so once more once again you read it.
After you finished you went on Cleverbot again and typed in,
"Are you ben?"
"…yes…"
Shivers ran down your spine. And finally you got gathered enough courage to type in, "are you real?" 
"Yes." You sat, then stunned, you thought "all of these stories were fake!They can't be real, right?" You sat there just mind blowed and finally you looked up at the screen, and you saw that ben has typed in "I'm coming out…" This was bizarre because you haven't even texted him back.
The lights shut off right after you read that text. The computer turned to a blue screen and started to get fuzzy and made those ear shredding noise static sounds that you hated. You were sure your ears would bleed but the room started to shake. You hid under the bed and layed their there starring stairing at the desk leg.
You waited there for what seemed like years and finally it stoped and you saw two brown boots hit the floor with a loud thud. You creeped over under the bed just enough to give you a good view of what this person looked like.
You peaked over to see a small boy about as tall as you, maybe a few centimetres taller. He had a very dark green outfit on with a long dark green hat, under his hat was blond hair that covered his face and he had a sword at his side.
He put the cover on the sword and threw it on the bed. He ,kneed kneeled one on one knee and reached under the bed. He grabed grabbed your wrist and pulled you out from under the bed! He raised you up and you stared into his crimson red eyes that had drieddark red blood coming from each eye.
"PLEASE LET ME GO!" You screamed and squirmed as he hald held your wrist so tight that it hurt.
He smirked as he pinder pinned you on the bed and kissed you so hard you lips stared to hurt. He came up for a breath of air and gave a little laugh and moved down to you neck. He kissed your neck gently and moved to your collar bone and toyed with your sensitive flesh 'till it turned bright pink. You mouned moaned under your breath as a faint blush creeped over your faceyou bite bit the bottom of your lip as the blond haired boy's hand let go of your wrists and moved over your skin and one ran down your back to your entrance. He entered one finger in you and gently and slowly moved it in and out.
"AH!…n …no ben!" You clung onto his back as he entered another finger. He picked you up and layed you on the bed and you had a feeling this was going to be a long night…
*********************
"AH~ …NO STOP… I …IM GOING TO AH~!" You heard the bed banging on the wall slow down as your body finally fell on the bed from exhaustion. You layed your head on the soft pillow and looked into the blond boy's red eyes as he leaned in and kissed you.
"You've meet met with a terrible fate haven't you?" He asked with the slightest smirk on his face.
You smile and looked at him once more "no …… cause I have you…" he blushed at your answer.You snuggle into his chest as he put his arm around you and held you tight as you drifted off to sleep.

Not to mention the run on sentences, but I'm not in the mood to correct everything. Hopes this helps. 
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disconsoIated Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  New member
best critique i've ever read ,
you win the internet 
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Zancrispy Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Finally Heart 
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JunoTheAwesomeFiore Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
not trying to be rude but it was a bit confusing. I suggest you make it clear to the readers what is BEN's purpose on going to the human world and try to sort it out. The use of grammar should also be enhanced so it will not confuse the others as well but this is a wonderful story. *Free Icon/Emote* Totoro ( Heart) 
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sara-fazbear Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait,...... In ur entrance !!! Uuhhh yeah I'm scared 4 life
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FlamingCatzIce Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Student General Artist
AGREED.
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sara-fazbear Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:3 help
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FlamingCatzIce Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Student General Artist
:3 nope
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sara-fazbear Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:'3 ok
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FlamingCatzIce Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Student General Artist
:''3 yep
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sara-fazbear Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:3 im bored
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FlamingCatzIce Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Student General Artist
:3 same
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dabestperson Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
this is actually a lime but its still wonderful
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Imaginationgirl2 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my. Oh my my my.
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AskMMDTayCanadian Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
woahhhh
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Nihanna88 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015
Heart Heart Heart 
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WifeOfLithuaniasSis Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015
Welp that escalated quickly :D (I Love this)
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LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
That was fast
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Socks17 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is a lime...
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derpysparklemonkey Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  New member Student Photographer
:D I LOVED IT wait caps lock sorry. i.loved.it
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Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015
0/////////0 
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Discordrulez Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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creepypastalemonlove Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it cute at the end with : "You've meet with a terrible fate haven't you?" He asked with the slightest smirk on his face.

You smile and looked at him once more "no …… cause I have you…" he blushed at your answer.

You snuggle into his chest as he put his arm around you and held you tight as you drifted off to sleep. that's cute
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DaEvilTwins Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Dats not a lemon.....
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Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015
Yes it is(btw cool pic)
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DaEvilTwins Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Tysm
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Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015
?
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DaEvilTwins Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
It means Thank-You-So-Much
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Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015
Yur awesome
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DaEvilTwins Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
:3
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Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015
^€^ 
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