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(HC) =hair color
(EC)=eye color
(Name) =name
(Sh/he) =she or he
(B/G) =boy or girl
You walked to the navy blue door and as you got closer you notice some black ooze coming out from under the door.
You hesitate to open it but soon gain enough courage to open it.
You heared a loud click and opened the door. It was very dark and hard to see but you manage to feel your was around. You felt a bed, a a shelf and sooner or later you found a lighter with a candle beside it as if someone put it their on purpose.
You light the candle and saw it was a normal room with a desk and a mini fringe under neath it you looked on the and saw a present with a note you picked up the note and you (e/c) orbs scaned the paper as you read what it said "I would give you my heart if you give me yours~ to:(name)" you question your self and wounder who would have put this here and why you would find it in a place like this?
You opened the box and almost throw up at what was in it you throw the heart shaped box acrossed the room and curled up in the farthest corner away from it what you saw was horrifying it was a heart a human one…
You sat in the corner stunded and felt a cold breeze wrap around you and then it went pitch black. The breeze blow out the candle! You heared the the door open and in came a tall boy with a blue mask off.
He closed the door and looked at you with his two black hallow sockets. You instenly knew who it was, you've read a lot of creepypasta and found fond to one and he was your favorite.
You though his story was very interesting and when you found a picture of him you fell head over hills.
He walked up to you but you were to freacked of because of this eerie house and cold chill that seemed to make shivers run up your spine. You backed away and hind in the farthest corner in the closet.
How were you going to get out?! You knew he was a killer?! Your brain was racing with thoughts and then the closet door swang opened and you screamed as loud as you can!
"PLEASE DONT KILL ME!!!! I WOULDN'T TELL ANYONE ABOUT THIS PLEASE!!!!" You screamed and sobed between your words.
He looked down at you and kneed down to your eye level and brushed your tears away with his thumb and pulled you for a hug.
Your heart was racing as you hugged back.
He lifed up his mask just up to his nose and gave you a deep kiss.
You felt the warmth of his lips against your and kissed back. You instenly felt calm and at ease. You cam up for a breath just as he pulled his mask back over his face you saw a toothy smile appear under his mask. He grabed you hand and helped you up.
You always wounder what his face looked like? You faced him and gave a soft smile as you hands raised to his face. You felt the smoothness of his mask and gently tuged it off. You held the mask in your hand and looked up at the boy. He gave an uneasy smile as you scaned his face. It was hark to see in the darkness of the room you could make out his blazing red hair and some facial features. You saw were his eye are suppose to be but saw pitch black sockets that never seemed to end. You smiled and rubbed his soft red hair and gave him a kiss. He grabed your hand and walked you home.
Well I hope you liked it and there might be alot of errors but I did try my hardest and please share this and go to my profile to find the introduction!!!!!!!!! IT WOULD MEAN A LOT TO ME!!!!!
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DisneyFanGirl4Life Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, it,
1) How did I get there?
2) WHY am I there?
3) Well... that escalated quickly...
4) Please, better grammar? I mean, at least you could've added commas!
5) Other then those reasons, good job!
crazzygiraffe04 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So. Much. FLUFF!!! Great job!Love Heart mini DummyHeart BillDip Icon [Commission] for   MYLITTLEBISCUIT 
sara-fazbear Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Not bad :) :) :) I like it
Carlli2000 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Student Artist
OMG I HAVE RED HAIR!!! (i thought he had brown...?? Oh well. Still adorbs ^^)
TaliTheStrange Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
wait.. i thought jack had brown hair??:)
Ravala Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Artist
Random thought: If you stuck a finger in his eye socket what would you feel?
Jerffes Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
You know I was just thinking that too....
Ravala Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student Artist
I guess it'd probably be gooey... or sticky... but other than that.... who knows... maybe there's an invisible force field that keeps you from doing that... hehe... 

Me: Hey EJ?!
EJ: Yes...?
Me: Can you come here for a minute?
EJ: *walks into room* What do you want...?
Me: Oh, nothing really... JustWannaSeeIfICanStickMyFingerInYourEyeSocket.
Ej: oh... *realizes* Wait- what?!
Me: *Smiles*
EJ: *runs away*
Me: *Follows*
Me: Come back here!
EJ: No!
Me: I just wanna know what'll happen!!!
Ej: I said no!!!!
Slendy: *grabs us by back of our clothes* What do you two think your doing?
Ej&Me: ........
Slendy: *glare* Go back to your rooms *sets us down*
Me: Whatever you say... slenderMOM.
Everyone but Slendy and me: *bursts into laughter*
Slendy: Erk- Why you... Come here! *chases me* 
Me: *runs away*

(Hahahahhahahahhahha! I'm such a witch >XD )
yaoianimelover2151 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
Can I use slendermom in a fanfic?
deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Jerffes Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
La la la la =P (Razz) 
FeartheHedgehog101 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww cuteness!~ :iconbeatingheartplz:
jeffthekillerlove12 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
pewdiecryfanforever Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
caitbear1205 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student Artist
95jkl219 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Student Artist
Aww me like.
shadowlox21 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Filmographer
i like it
creepygirl1 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Cuuuuuuuute,nice story's:-) 
Crazygirl1519 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Aaawww cute for a bit I thought that he would take reader-chans heart literally oops hehe
VulpineRinKagamine Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
I love how nice he is to me and the other readers.
michiganlovesromano Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww eyeless jack is so nice to reader chan
KayceeSkyes Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Student Artist
I love eyeless Jack
hollybella Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
usually i would be bawling like a baby, expecaly after knowing he eats peoples kidneys... but good story i like.Sweden x Finland emote 
Bilztwing Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Good job! Keep writing :D
StealthElf Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yuiko Kuruguya (Adorable) [V1]  Your icon tho!
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